Hello Peoples

Hey guys, Fourth strip is done, well actually I had it done on Thursday but I was too distracted too put it up, and do all the text adding stuff, which really only takes a couple of minies.
Anyways, almost reached 5 done, then once that's done, I can look at getting ten done, then twenty, then fifty, then one hundred and whoboy don't get ahead of yourself.
Alrighty,I've decided to start writing the first chapter of Saudes Saga so far I have a page and a bit written, I could say I have actually written it before but never a proper long version, I'm working on it generally each night before I go to bed.
And just so you know here's all my different story world's at the moment...
Saudes Saga- Science Fiction and fantasy elements type story, very anime styled
The Realm- Realistic setting with some supernatural elements added, Medieval world based
Chronicle of Ovaleen- Created for a DND campiagn, very straight forward High Fantasy type setting, big armies a few heroes to save the world that kind of thing
Newstory- Superhero based and will be the subject of my first attempt at a manga stylised book thing.
Anyways, then I also have that project I'm working on with a couple of friends, and TFtLP.
I probably will be creating a section on my website soon where I'll be able to post up some of my writing, after I get it proof read by my friends(if they want to read it of course...) And I may put up some of my old past stories which my friend Brendan recently found and gave back to me!
Good old Jake's little adventure, it'll give you a strange alternative look at a lot of my characters from the Guardian Universe, and yes Eledor is in it too, and he is unfortunatel ccol... :)
Anyways other then that another long week ahead of me...
Sayonara folks and have fun!

And I have a newer website...!

Mortigi Tempo has generously allowed me to make a website on his server. So now my website has a new home at http://www.guardianuniverse.com/index.html.
Anyways the third TFtLP is up, I gotta start picking up the quality again, comparing the first one to the other two I can only go...gah!
Anyways, have a visit, if you want...I won't force ya...ah who am I kidding, go or I'll throw a spoon, at something resembling a pillow or something! That's right fear for the pillow's safety...FEAR!
Others then that I may start setting up the Newstory side of the comic thingy, soon...I mean I've got the basic outline of what I want to happen for 100 pages, and the primary characters all sorted out, just need to work on actual character designs, get my drawing skills up enough to make a passable manga, then I've got it ready to go, oh and possible write up a written version first. Be my first real attempt at writing porperly in a while, and in chronological order as well...
Anyways that's enough from me folks, sayonara! :)

Gah tired!

My entire weekend just flew by, I drove for seven hours in two days, and god I'm buggered.
My websites decided to go stuff it self up, I can't access the file manager where I store all my files and I'm almost ready to give up on it. The damn server automatically puts a delayer into the code, which is what the loading screen is a direct result of...
Gah!
I tried up dating it on Friday but the damn thing refused to work, Hopefully it fixes itself up soon, cause I can't do anything to fix things at the moment...
Haven't had the time to really get the next three Tales from the lettuce patch strips ready though they are already pretty much planned out, just have to draw the good copies.
I've started finelining my pictures now, and several of them have come out great, well except this one, I used blue fineliner, so I don't think it turned out all that great once I started adding colour to it.
Anyways that's the main character from my up coming comic Newstory, that I'm working my skill up to draw properly, still gots some way to go methinks...
Anyways I think I'll post the next couple of Tales from the lettuce patch on my blog, until I can get my site working again... :(
Well sayonara folks till maybe monday night!

Hi Guys

You may have noticed that the server my site is currently on is a little slow, but its free. 100mb with an attached email account of 100mb.
Also several sections of the site aren't complete, and in the comics section there is a Newstory thingy, that's going to be my main comic for the site other then Tales from the lettuce patch, got some great ideas for a couple more strips from work today as well.
Anyways Newstory is going to be a Superhero styled attempt at a manga constructed thingy. That I've decided on a maximun of 100 pages for the primary story arch of it. Split into 4 chapters of 25 pages at most.
Other information will be revealed when I actually start the thingy.
Anyways I think I really need to work on my backgrounds for my pictures, and how to fit the characters into them a bit betterm but then Tales is a quick strip to draw, and the most cleaning up I do is replacing the written talking bits with computer text.
Other then that hope you guys can keep managing to have a look now and then at my website, I've got things planned for it, including adding writing for people to read, and other random junk.
Anyways I'll may blog tomorrow or sometime during the wekk so until then Sayonara folks, keep safe, drive safe and uh...eat safe?

And I have a website!

Go check it out at:

Here

FRUSTRATED!

I never ealised how bloody hard it was to get a simple site working on the internet!

Anyway I've done my first comic, and have set up my site, only its offline...and not quite finished, but bloody hell its a mess!
Maybe I should try doing it their way...

Anyways here's my comic for those who want to see it, just a three Comic strip thing
If you can't tell I'm meant to be the long haired lad with the hat...poor guy
It's not to good but Rome wasn't built in a day I guess... :(
Anyways I'm off to bed.
Sayonara folks, maybe tomorrow I'll have http://eledor.infinites.net up and running, hopefully...

Webcomics as far as the eye can see!

And now for something I found extremely hilarious
http://www.graphicsmash.com/comics/killroyandtina.php?name=killroyandtina&view=single&ID=4095
Visit that link and prepare to laugh at the flying giraffe!

Anyways, gave up on trying to fix p the other comic, it was too far gone to truly save, unfortunately would've made a nice introduction to the Saudes Saga. but I digress.

Officially I'm the script writer for the video we are making in CERT IV, but to hit a nail in the coffin of this project, people keep dropping out of the course, and I'm quite sick of it!
We had 16 people at first, yesterday we had 5 people in the actual class.

Anyways its extremely late and I shoulda posted this ages ago

Sayonara and thanks for all the fish!

Greetings from the deep black space under my desk

Anyways, I've been playing WOW for the past two days, made a character and got them up to lvl 11, now that took me something close to 12 hours of playing, usually I can get a character up to 10 in two hours, but this time I was invited into my brother's guild, and I spent more time chatting with the guildies then playing, shocking that, I even died a few times because I was so busy chatting.
I made people laugh, not through doing stupid stuff by saying witty things to, well writing funny things, I always have said I'm a different person when writing then when I'm speaking. For one I can't mumble.
I bet tonnes of people have noticed how I mumble...
Anyways I also managed to fit some drawing practise in as well, gotta keep at it if I want to get better, and I've done two pages of what amounts to a shoddy comic, but again that's also practise, I might post them after I spend some time cleaning them up a lot, they might burn out your retina if I don't with just how horrible they are....
But I figured the art mightn't be great but good art can't carry a crap story, so if I get the writing right I can let the quality slip at first, once I get much more comfortable drawing the quality will improve...
And i have work tomorrow, its a blessing and a curse that my boss has injured his ankles, as now I have to work instead of him. At least the latest loads have been relatively small...though 3 hours for 50 kilos of turnips was extreme...
Anyways, if I fix up the comic pages I've done by tomorrow I'll put them up for you guys to have a gander, if I'm talking to anyone that is... :(
Sayonara folks and have a good week!

Heya folks!

I'm back again, anyways I redid one of the pictures I put up last time, it's only a slight fix up butI think it improves the look of the picture...
Anyways also today in DV documentary we had to come up with a storyline for our video we had to do...
Of course everyone started throwing ideas around, but not helpful ideas, these were ideas that would completely change what we had originally planned on and quite frankly were a little crappy, anyways our deadline was coming up to have something written down and I got sick of all the procrastinating everyone was doing, and took charge, I forced them to agree on something despite their strange way of looking at things, wrote an outline for the storyline which is very generic and crappy I will admit but we can iron out the kinks later, anyway and wrote a summary everyone could take home with them, I also got help from another guy who went over what I had written and helped make it sound better, and less crappy. Still crap, but with a budget of next to nothing (as in whatever we ourselves can donate to the project) we had to go with something that would be simple to execute, though we did manage to have a rather complicated car chase scene planned out by the end of the day, where every henchman happens to be played by the same guy, who just so happens to have been the only guy to really help sought out what the group was doing. I love Tafe I get to do things I normally wouldn't...

Anyways Tell me what ya think of the relatively more symmetrical picture above, its not fine art hell I wouldn't class it as good art, just okay for me...anyways don't qoute me on this but I plan to have a site and at least a couple pages of comic up by June 28th
Sayonara folks and dolphins

Ps. here's another picture I drew but forgot to post

Hey its been a little while but I'm backish

I got lazy over the holidays so I decided not to do anymore posts during that time...anyways back at Tafe again...on the comic front I've deciuded to do my trial comic based in Chronicles of Ovaleen, set 24 years before the events of the campaign.
Main characters are Kira Davis and Vladimir Von Von.

I based Vladimir's look off one of the heads you can use in KOTOR, the character I made with that head by chance happened to also be called Vladimir Von Von.
And I guess I'll chuck on another picture of Kira as well.

Anyways tell me what ya'll think of my two new characters I invented for this trial comic
Who knows maybe I'll continue the comic to the druid saga
Anyways sayanara folks, and please tell me what ya think!

ps. I'll see if I can get my site up on the weekend.

Kinda tired

Relay for life from 22:00 to 06:00 I think I was up for something like 24 hours straight...

Anyways I just got up about an hour ago, I've been practising my drawing quite frequently over the past week and now I'm on holidays!
Two weeks of playing computer and video games, and working, and drawing and writing.
I also have a web address now, though somehow I managed to spell my name for it wrong...anyways, http://eledor.infinties.net, which is where I'll start putting up my comic once I finish sorting out how to use html again.
Unlike other webcomics I intend to have a history page as well as a cast page, as my story is part of a larger world. I might even try the whole donation wallpapers and stuff like that eventually if I start getting regular visitors.
Anyways enough of what maybe, I think I might try to detox myself this holidays, the amount of pepsi I've been drinking over the past couple of weeks can't have been good for me, and it'll be good to cut back a lot, might save my money as well...
Anyways, my friend Tenderfoot is getting married soon, and I get to go to the wedding! YAY! Hope those two have a wonderful life together.

Anyways sayonara

I'm not broke anymore!

Well if $175 makes me not broke I ain't anyway. That's more money then what I've seen in nearly three months!
Man I feel like crap, limping around, barely able to use my right hand properly, stupid blisters from onion tieing...
Anyways I had fun today, I even bought a little toy ninja sword thingy. I'm so proud.
At Tafe today, this is for DV documentary, my class that focuses on camera work and lighting and such and such, we got to do some filming.
I've gotta say choreographing a fight scene is hard work, and I looked like an idiot today!
Anyways, I've come to the conclusion that I need to be able to matain a serious face while in front of a camera, especially if I'm meant to be a henchman of some description.
Anyways, we had the only girl in our group act as the heroine, who proceeded to walk through and kill all of us henchmen, there was about six to eight of us...I am proud to say I was the first to die!
We were protecting our leader a melodramtic guy who had a big sword and liked running away while sacrificing his henchmen to the heroine. Though trust me the girl in our group can be classed as a little butch.
Anyways, I respawned once and fought the first part of the final battle against the heroine again, with three others, though I was probably the only one on time.We died vainly protecting our leader, before he engaged her in a fierce slightly choregraphed duel, before she mortally wounded him against a large tree. He then with the last of his strength pulled out a gun and shot her in the heart killing her instantly...in the end we all died...YAY!
Anyways, it was fun, other then the fact that i was still hurting from yesterday and probably pulled some leg muscles.

Tomorrow working in the rain, oh happy day...that is if it rains though...

Anyways that's enough from me, if anyone reads this anymore...*sniff*

Sayonara peeps

So...tired

I just had work today, all 8 hours and 45 minutes of it...

175 cabbages, I cut on my own, and helped pack the last thirty.
830 onions of which I personally tied 50 bunches of ten, with string, tore some skin off my little finger in the process, and something like 2000+ lettuce, of which I cut a good percentage of them.
Most of it was done with just Gavin my boss and the new guy, who somehow managed to not have organised a shower for himself, breakfast or lunch, managed to put rotten lettuce in a processing bin, can't pack for the life of him, and had no money to buy himself lunch...
But I digress work stresses aside I've got now about 14 hours of work money owed to me, maybe 12 now that I think about it... $120 I hope...
Any who haven't had anytime to even think about practsing drawing or writing yet, but I'll porbably try to get some writing in before I go to bed...
And on a sadder note, my good work buddy friend Keith was at a funeral today for one of his better friends...
Anyhows I'm tired need to have a shower and need SO MUCH SLEEP...but can't have it yet, but I'll have money soon YAY!
I hate being broke...
So guys IS ANYONE STILL ALIVE OUT THERE!?
Ahem...till next I blog,
Sayonara

Finally somethings going right!

Work started up for me last week, after two months of little to no work I'm back earning money!
Finally I can start paying debts off again, like that $220 I owe my brother...anyways I've started playing WOW again, but then I haven't played it in ages, its nice to come back to things occasionally. I read an awesome Manga, named Ruronni Kenshin, about the Meiji Period of Japan and a swordsman who was partially responsible for the overthrow of the Shogun.
I also got a weeks reprieve on that assignment I had to hand in! Phew...and here I was panicking...
My new favourite song is Overkill, played in scrubs.
And yes one of my new favourite shows is Scrubs, Dr Cox is awesome!
Anways might try and do some experimentation with backgrounds, and also do some work on my hands and feet. Maybe have them hold a sword or something...
Also with my webcomic I'll start it by having a few practise runs, with random stories and differing levels of humour and seriousness, helps me practise my story writing skills and willl teach me what its like to keep to a deadline for once...
Anyways that's enough from me, come on guys comment aways, I haven't heard nearly enough from you guys...
Sayonara folks

Another picture I drew during a lunch break. As you can clearly see it is Eledor, as I kinda think he'll appear in the Comic.
I still need a lot of work on my hands, but I can still make passable looking pictures, I guess.
Anyways what do you think of this picture. This is probably how I'm going to end up drawing Eledor with some alterations.

Man I'm getting stressed out over this game I"ve gotta make, its due in a day, and I've barely started, I'll probably be staying up to two on thursday night making a passable game. Bloody hell I've had two goddamn weeks to do this damn thing and I don't start it properly till the day before its due!
It's official I'm a stupid person, who is extremly lazy...
Anyways on a lighter note, I think I've finished my Brief 1 for 3d. A simple modelling exercise where I chose to create a pen holder thingy and chucked in a higly detailed clicker pen, that I also created, svereal Mechanical pencils, and two normaller looking pencils.
They don't look to realistic but hey, I've only just began! Bahahaha...

I have storyboarrded out the first couple of pages, but the storyboards for each page are unfortunately no higher then two centimetres, makes it very hard to tell what's meant to be happening, in an action filled manga style comic...

Anyways till next we meet, sayonara...(I wonder if I spell that right???)

Lazy week...

I've had a real lazy week this last week, didn't do a single thing to help myslef at all...just spent it playing medieval II and about an hour of WOW, not much considering the fourty or so hours I spent playing Medieval...
Anyways I saw Hot Fuzz on the weekend and it was awesome, a little slow, but the last thirty minutes has some of the most insane and hilarious action scenes I've ever seen, oh and Timothy Dalton has a major role in it as well. Its by the same people who did Shawn of the Dead, and Simon Pegg again is the titular main character, this time a hard bitten offiscious cop who was so good at his job he made the rest of the force look useless in comparison, so they sent him off to a quiet town in the country.
That's basically the first five minutes of the film, Bill Bailey also has an appearance, and Bill Nighy.
I loved it, its funny from start to finish, and should be watched by everyone.
And yes I haven't so much as drawn more then a single head this whole damn week...I hate practising, but if I want to get better at drawing I'll need to really knuckle down...
Anyways sayonara

Boy can I copy!

I've discovered the fact that if someone puts a picture in front of me, I can produce a fairly decent replicar, now if I can use those guiding images, I may be able to start producing my own original art. With my comic I'll make a sort of gag a day comic or something, where I'll try every opportunity to practise my artwork, backgrounds, character movements, characters themselves...
Then the Realm will start, if I can get the quality up...
AnywaysI've finally rearranged my room and managed to keep it clean!
My bed is now up against the wall, I've moved my big chest of draws, and boy does my room feel different, A lot more open for starters, and I have three chest of draws.
Also my sister went through two of my shelves of my bookcase, ended up with six bags of rubbish, don't quite know how it all fit in there but anyhow it was quite impressive. Now my millions of one tenth used exercise books are all neatly stored in folders. Next my wardrobe, with sveral years of acculmated junk, with five times the capacity of my bookcase...*shudder*
Anyways, still playing Medieval II, probably should get around to checking what work I need to do for TAFE, seeing as I have so much freetime...no work in about two months now...probably should look for a new job, and figure out how to save money better, saving probably more important at the moment.
Anyways, I'm fine by the way, wonder what everyone else is up to?
Sayonara

Hey's peoples, yoouse still alive?

Where'd everybody go?
Ah well, if no one feel likes telling me my pictures aren't great fine. Anyways, one of my brothers guinea pigs died today well maybe two days ago, I always wondered when too many pets would overwhelm him. He has enough trouble handling Sandro as it is.
Of course I had to bury it for him too...what am I the resident grave digger. Sure I've racked up a lot of kills from animal neglect, uh maybe thirty, but then I was young stupid and quite surprised nowadays that mum and Dad trusted me with that many guinea pigs...
Anyways I've been playing Medieval II, its a good game, except for the Grand Campaign. I don't know what it is about it but, I have to keep quitting one team to try another, I find out they're about the same then I repeat the process.
So far my favourite kingdom is the Holy Roman Empire, MEIN KAISER!
They give each team different accents based on their country of origin, though some teams are very similar to others.
I love Iron Maiden!
Anyways I'll see ya round next time...if anyone reads this again, ACH why do I have to be so BORING!

Another drawing by me!

Here's another drawing, this time I coloured it with photoshop, so tell me what ya think.
Other then that, this is a variantion of my normal Eledor picture, he lacks the eye scar, tatoo marks on his cheek, and the two scars on his left cheek.
I dub this pick, coloured Vincent.
anyways, please tell me what ya think, I didn't get any comments on my last post and its been almost a day!, or it has I sometimes lose count of them....
To top it off I have to make a game in flash in two weeks while having all of the ideas and none of the actual no how needed for it... Hooo boy...Anyways i better head off to bed...

Drawing

I decided to post an image, of a character I drew not traced, using all the correct methods for drawing manga. Though it is very similar to the guide image. But I drew it not traced it!
Its a picture of Aeries from the Saudes Saga, Return of Ruin, hence the moderny clothes.

I still have trouble drawing the hands right without a guiding image. The feet are also a pain. But it looks well proportioned for once, I usually make them to short or make their head to big.
Anyways, hope that gives you an idea where I'm up to with my drawing skills at the moment.

More details...I know...boring

Anyways, I've started writing out the intro to the Realm, and I think I will put it here now, no talking in this part.
And it is just a draft, so this is where comments would help, like a change in tone, or a suggestion for diffferent wording, or whatever. Please no vagaries, they really don't help me.
Anyways here it is, you might have read it before to, I do like rewriting my intros over and over.

Night settled over the keep like a great cloak of darkness. The only lights were those carried by the sentries patrolling the darkened walls. None noticed the hooded and cloaked figure slip onto the top of the wall.
One guard stood between it and the stairs leading down to the keep but he faced the wrong way. The figure silently moved up behind the guard, almost wraith like. In one movement it broke the unexpecting man's neck and pushed his ccrpse off the wall.
Quickly it moved down the stairs lest it be seen and opened the thick wooden door that barred its passage. Stepping through it found itself in what could only be the servants quarters. Carefully and silently the claoked figure navigated around the many bunks, a servant stirred and looked up as the figure passed his bunk. A small whimper escaped his throat as the figure looked at him for a moment, its face hidden in the shadows of its volumous hood.
The moment passed and the figure continued on dismissing the threat of the poor man. passing through a door it entered a corridor, knowing instantly where it was and where it had to go the figure began moving quickly towards the end of the corridor. Heading for the single door at the end.
The door proved no obstacle, its lock was easily picked and the figure entered a bedroom. A young woman slept noiselessly, her long aubrun hair spread out like a fan around her face. A near black sword was drawn slowly and cermoniusly from the folds of its great cloak and swung up before its shadowed face. It flowed to the side of the bed and stood over the woman for a long moment.
Suddenly she stirred and looked sleepily up at the black cloaked figure, her eyes widened in shock and she let lose a scream. The sword swung down and all became silence.

If you want ya can give me some criticism, also that's how I plan to start my comic, like the first three or four pages, anyways.
Let me have it, with teh criticism, and I'll have a revised version up at some later point. For some reason and I don't get why, but I'm banned from writing posts at BRIT, but I can look at my blog, its kinda frustraing.
Anyways, sayonara peoples

The Realm comic

Okay, now I've actually planned out the first couple of pages already, now all I have to do is wait until my drawing skill is capable of matching my storyboarding skills. I also need to work on my dialogue because I haven't decided on the specifics.
Three weeks into BRIT and I'm enjoying myself, I didn't enjoy Education, I tried but found the lectures boring sleep worthy and stuff, but with this course I can stay awake because I'm not forced to sit in a room with more then a hundred students and listen while a teacher while a teacher explains down in front what is going on. Lectures just don't work for me.
I'm also finding it kind of easy most of the time which is a good thing, but also challenging when it needs to be. Now all I have to do is start playing with the programs outside of class time to get even better.
Going back to my comic.
The main characters are Aeries, a squire of the Shandrillan knight Order, and her mentor and trainer Eledor. Later on they are joined by a young girl named Emyli, and by others but in general it will be just the two of them, encountering problems on their travels across the vast Realm.
The Realm is a massive Empire, only matched by its Southern neigbour the Aethyran Empire and by the Eastern barbarian tribes of Stanza.
The Realm is based partly on the Byzantine Empire during its prime, when its armies were on the cutting edge of science.
Anyways that's enough from me.
I like my secondary hair!(hat)

Sayonara folks

Definitive direction

Okay I've now decided to set the comic in the Realm.
The prinicple main characters are Eledor and Aeries.
It is about how Eledor takes Aeries on as his squire and how they adventure across the Realm, meeting strange people, dealing with problems they encounter and stuff.
They meet other characters in their travels and even have a few join their little group.
Anyways sayonara

Ideas?

Hey peoples, me again.
I was hoping for some help in deciding the storyline and style of my comic.
I've already decided it'll be done in right to left manga style, as it means each page will be different and allows for more dynamic scenes and stuff.
What I would really like help with is if I should set it in present day or go for a different time period for where it is set.
Main characters were determined to be Eledor(not at start of comic), Aeries, Emyli, Ronen, Claire. Ronen and Claire are generally a pair so they can pretty much count as one character.
I was orignally going to set it in a fictional Australian town named Toreno, and Have Emyli, Ronen and Claire as new students at Toreno Senior Seconday College. But I've been rethinking that, I don't if I'd really like to do a school setting as it is fairly heavily used in most webcomics I've read.
Anyways, if anyone can come with an opinion from what I wrote above, I'd like to hear it.
Anyways Sayonara

hmmm...webcomic?

Asked me what this was couple years back I wouldn'tve had a clue, now I would be able to tell you what the biggest ones are, without hesitation. PVP. Penny Arcade, Megatokyo and the Wotch.
All have a decided focus on humour, although MegaTokyo has become a bit more serious over the years it has been going, which I've found to be a very interesting process.
And now I've come to the decision to write and draw my own. I'll need to get a website I can stash it on, and actually think up a decent storyline, work out how my characters will look in the comic, work on my dialogue and then if I manage all that I can actually start.
I've made an original story up for the comic, but it will use all of the primary characters from the Saudes Saga, and now all I have to do is work on my drawing skills and viola, it will hopefully be cool. Then after I get a hundred or so done, I'll try to spread the word on the net about my comic...aah yes plans. Anyways, while doing that of course I'm doing my course and occasionally working on my stories, and probably doing some script writing for my friend's game, and trying to get some work in as well.
I've got a busy year ahead of me if all goes to plan....

I'm in BRIT!

I love it when thigs go my way.
Now all I have to do is work consistantly hard for 800 hours of class time, and I'll be fine I hope.
The course I'm in is Certificate IV Computer Multimedia, or Games Technology as they advertise it in the paper.
I'll be using flash, 3dfmax and from the sounds of things about 12 other people will be in the course with me! Now that's a small class size!
I'll have classes, on Tuesday to Friday, with monday's off, so I can still work. Each day will be taken by a different teacher and focus on one key area. Such as 2d animation and #d animation.
And at the end I have the chance to get not one certificate IV but 2, one in computer multimedia and another in prject management, or something.
Starting on the 13th of February.
And there I was panicking before I went in, I was worried I wouldn't meet the minimun requirements for the course and have to do a different area and everything. So it's all cool now.

Other then that, I'll put up a short story or too soon on my blog. And I think it's about time that I write the first chapter for the Saudes Saga. Go over it fix it up have a look at different conversations options, try and get it to sound natural. Go over any fight scenes a few times to try to get the action more fluid and natural sounding. And if anyone wants to they can have a look at my short stories I'll write and COMMENT on them please, critise them tell me what's wrong with them or right, and no vague it just doesn't sound right. Blunt is best, just don't tell me I suck either...

Anyways sayonara

Hmmm, BRIT

You know what I think I'll do BRIT, an IT course, multimedia certificate IV, it's more along my lines of interest.
I was always against BRIT during my time in Uni, now I find that I hate uni, there was no real support structure, the lecturers just didn't seem to care half the time. Education, was fun while it lasted but, it was also very boring a lot of the time. I'm not particularily predeposed towards lectures, I can't stand sitting listening to a person for an hour, but then how do I know TAFE will be any different? Time will tell.

I may not have said this already, but I've watched this movie called Steamboy, and it was fantastic, well the animation was anyway. Most expensive japanese animated film ever with a budget of nearly thirty million. In american terms that's a fairly cheap film, but the Japanese can do so much more with a smaller budget. It even had Patrick Stewart as a voice actor. It had mind blowing animation, well not really brain exploding but it was definitely good, but I found it to have a rather typical plot, a man goes mad from his power, his father tries to stop him, and ultimately it concludes with most of London being frozen...go figure.
Anyways enough from me sayonara.

This word failure...intriguing...

In my entire life I've never failed a single subject, the worst I ever recieved was a D in English Literature, last year. I just got my results about two days ago, god I hate that word...got.

To put it bluntly I failed three out of four subjects, for this semester. I was expecting to at least pass two not one.
Well educations dead for me, I can't seeing myself going back to do a four year course, and taking five years to do it.
So I may end up heading to BRIT and defer for a year at uni. Then after getting a certificate IV in Information Technology I may go back to uni, to do a computing course.

Its odd, but I'm glad education is over, I'm done with the entire course for now. I enjoyed my time on practicum, but for some reason no matter what I did all I got was terrible reports for it, I had needs improvement in nearly everything in part of a report, yet the comments were along the lines, of did great, needs some better direction to classes, but my god, I didn't do that poorly, first years are meant to observe what teachers do, write notes, and take a few classes, I wrote in the end nearly fifteen lesson plans, took nearly ten hours worth of classes, and had to put up with usually well behaved children acting up horribly. one of them even cheered when they were told it was my last day.

Parents reaction was as I expected it would be, part of the reason I never really brought up the point that I was having trouble getting motivated to do much of anything. I should've deffered for the year, and found a real job, I haven't had a real job 9 to 5 sought of thing in ever, other than one week of Bendigo Books.
I would've learnt a few useful things if I had, and got a bit more motivated to continue in another area.

One thing I've learnt about my parents, they don't like to hear that their kids are having any sought of trouble, but then when I ask for help with subjects they blink at me and tell me to ask my friends or brother for help. I got told off for getting very goods on a mid semester report in year seven, it wasn't even a proper assessment of my skills.

Anyways thats enough from me sayonara

Bored Bored Bored...

I haven't played World of Warcraft for nearly two months now, I wonder how my guild is going if it still exists...it was up to around ten fairly active players on it. Then my time ran out, and I became broke, so I couldn't afford to pay for another two month game card...
Just sitting here in front of my computer I realize just how bored I am. There was one thing I liked about World of Warcraft, the ability to log in and play at anytime, do some quests go up a level, it passed the time. And helped me stop being bored for little bits. I mean don't get me wrong the game got boring at times to, I am very easily bored of a game if I play it to much, stop feeling like I have a challenge and all that, damn k buton on keyboard sticking in like that...
One exam down three to go. My passing two subjects rest on me getting a good mark on them, the other two less so.
Damn my laziness, type factor!
World of Warcraft makes even Oblivion seem small in comparison, there's just so much to explore and do, and then you can redo it all with another character, I loved making characters in that game...

Anyways, I better try and distract myself with some game I'm bored of...

Seeya chumps, and pandas

Is it just me?

Why do I have such trouble getting started on work?
I mean I've been really slack this year, wait I remeber VCE, with its DLAs...The things that don't give you a mark but were necessary for you not to fail. I really don't see the sense in that...
Anyway I was extremely lazy when it came to the DLAs, I only handed them in when I got the letter home about it, in general about three or so weeks, after the day it was orginally due in. The lack of consequences and the actual fact that it really didn't matter when it was handed in as long as the teacher saw it, eventually.
I learnt one important thing from VCE, how to be lazy.

Year 7-10 I was still the way I was thanks to my primary teacher, I handed in work and did a lot of experimenting with ways of writing and drawing. Teachers actually liked me, and encouraged me to be myself in eveything I did.
Get to VCE, one of the key things I remember was one teacher saying my work needs to be less me, little wonder that I got poor marks all the way through...

Yes I hate VCE, I hate it lots...

Enough on that, now I'm meant to be doing some work for a class, that I'm handing in on Monday, that is very boring and long type of work, that I will probably have to finish either tomorrow or Monday morning...

Ah well bettter make a start...

Sayonara peoples, and pandas...

Just wanted a change?!

Why do people say this everytime they dye their hair.
I know a tonne of people who say this as an excuse for dying their hair, and I really don't know why they bother making up an excuse or something. I mean they could say, I got bored of the colour I was born with so I decided to bleach all the pigment out of my hair.
And then they call it white, when in reality it is only a light blonde.
Golly gosh, what is the world coming to?!

I mean its not like I wouldn't want white hair, for some odd reason, but the best way of changing your hair ccolour seems to only come up with a light blonde, not the white white.

I MEAN COME ON!

(cough*) ahem anyway I've started watching a show called Naruto, it drags things out like Dragonball Z, but... its about Ninjas!
And it has real gore. In onw episode I saw one of the characters literally sprouting needles and coughing up blood, and this show is showed at six o'clock on Cartoon Network...I wonder if they got their classification right?
And it has a warning that it is PG, not M, or MA, but PG...

Just because it is an animated show, doesn't mean the violence in it is any less, bloody then an M rated program.

Ghost in the Shell SAC, was rated M, and in the first episode the main character kicks the foot off a sniper type bad guy, with the resulting blood, and gore. I mean is that really M?

Anyway Ive got exams real soon, so fun for me...
(bored tone) yay (waving hand in the air half heartedly.)

So see ya'll next time folks, I'll be back...I think

Greetings from the deep blue yonder

Hello again...

I've been playing Elder Scrolls IV recently, and basically its all I want to play.
The game is just so large, compared to everything else I've ever played. There is far more to this game then simply lvling up.

I've barely even begun to explore the whole game world, and from what I've heard recently, there's still a lot more to the gameworld than what you can currently access, the world's so big already, and there's still more to it...

My current character is based around Eledor, in appearance, clothes he wears, and the weapons he uses. He is Archmage of the Mages guild, Grand Champion of the Arena, and is only lvl 7.
And I've just started with the thieves guild and Fighters guild.
I wish I had more time to play this game...

Anyway I'm now back at uni, and with my writing I've gone to the Realm, as it has the most room to expand, as I haven't given it a straight forward kill that guy, move onto next type approach. It's has large scale battles, but the thing that makes this one different to the others is that the world the story takes place in is largely static. Small things may change but on the whole the world stays the same, despite the actions of the main protaganists.
Eledor is still a deadly swordsman, however he is riddled with character flaws, and for once is actually human, so he is mortal, rather than immortal. He takes frequent injuries and spends ages recuperating from them.
He is a wandering knight, of an unknown sect.

In the Realm knights act as the officers, chief investigators and secret police, and holy men of the church, they are seperated into sects depending on the role in society they take.
Gold Knights act as the trainers and teachers of the order.
Silver Knights act as the elite Bodyguards to the Emperor, and the Arch Cleric.
Blue Knights act as the chief police force in the the Realm, and are responsible for maintaining the law in the cities.
Forest Knights act as country police forces and are far fewer in number to a much larger area, generally they are very hard working individuals.
Red Knights act as the internal police, and keep an eye on the other sects to make certain none over step their bounds as knights.
Gray Knights act as the officers of the army, and are structured very differently to the other sects, much more organised and ordered.
Raven Knights; act as the secret police, they are responsible for removing troublesome people who the law can't contain, effectively they act as a state sanctioned assassins guild.
Brown Knights act as the holy men of the order. And frequently serve as priests in the more dangerous regions of the Realm where it would be to dangerous to send normal priests.

Each sect has a Sect leader the title for each is different.
Knights become knights by first recieving an education at an academy, usually they are from well to do families, or are part of the nobility, then they become a squire to a full fledged knight, who furthers their training for another two years, and gives the squires practical experience and an idea of what sect they would prefer to join, generally the squire joins the same sect as the knight he is attached to.
The Realm is only starting to recognise equality of sexes, so female knights are few and far between. They are unusual but not unheard of, but like any male dominated career a lot of sexism can occur.

This presents Aeries with a problem, she is the only girl at the academy, though she is the adopted daughter of the Gold Knight in charge of the academy, also she is born of peasant stock while most of the knights in training are of noble blood. Double wammy.

Not all knights are trained warriors, for the Raven Sect, subtlety and guile are far more useful, though they do recieve rudimentary self defense training.

I'll go into more detail of the Sects next time.

Anyway, the other Guardian Universe stories have magic and gods as major focuses of their storylines. The Realm is a lot more realistic, and is really the orginal Guardian Universe. with influence now from Oblivion and Medieval Total War.

Anyho, till next we meet...

Stressing out much?!

I hate being the first to admit it, but I think I'm feeling the first effects of being stressed out.
Constant sought of worrying that I have to do something, but can't quite bring myself to do it, whatever that something is.

So to keep my mind of it I will talk about my rather uneventful trip to the Grampians.

For starters the unit which was worth $110 a day was not worth it. Straight flat out it was a total ripoff. It was one of those cheap portable things; with an oven, a toilet, a curtained shower, two sinks(shock horror, one in the bathroom one in the what went for a kitchen), a table with six chairs around it, just enough plates and utensils for five people, four bunk beds, and one double bed. Oh and a twelve inch tv, without a dvd player!
However after exploring hall gap for a while we realised why there was no dvd player. The only place that rented out dvds, had enough to fill a small shopping bag,*counting* the videos in that same stand.
The walk however was worth it I guess, about sevn k's long and completely planned by me, on the fly as we were came upon signs that pointed us in directions. I also carried the bag full of water, and the jackets and stuff, as everyone seemed to be dieing from lifting the massive 3 kilo weight worth of water that was in the bag.
So for the most part I lead us( being my sister and brother). Nice place to walk if you don't mind the occasional sheer drop only thirty centimetres away from where you are walking. At one point I couldn't bring myself to go any further, due to the very unsafe nature of the rock, it had recently rained, of course just to spite me, despite my obvious distress at being near such a god awfully unsafe spot, my brother took it upon himself to explore further.
He went out of earshot for about five minutes and I couldn't see him either. I was terrified to be that close to a sheer edge. And I had horrible images of falling off that sheer face, down to a nasty death.
Finally we left there and headed for a more sedate and half dead waterfall instead much to my relief.
I don't mind heights so much, its just heights where a single poorly placed foot can send you plummiting to your death, that I have trouble with.
Anyway we headed back, and my brother shouted us to Icecream, and Fudge.

I've come to the decision that I can clean my room up rather well, hoever maintaining it as clean is a whole different ball game...for me that is. I'm surprised I don't have more bugs in this room.

Anywho, I took a break from wrting this weekend, in fact the only stuff I did do, was write the word Eledor, and a brief description of Wren amounting to about twenty words in total. Instead I read a Terry Prachet book, the Douglas Adams of Fantasy, as I read it once put. Guards! Guards!

It has the best ever intro to a book, in the form of its acknowledgements.

He acknowledges the contribution of the city guard in fantasy stories, the guys who get killed by the hero in many bloody ways, who are only trying to do their job, and feed a family.
The Discworld is awesome!

Sayanara folks

Is blogging really worth it?

The main reason I started blogging was to showcase story ideas and get criticism on them, constructive in nature.

I don't like talking about me, I'm more interested in other people then myself. I'm boring, slightly eccentric maybe but in a boring meandering way.

I like my stories, and I'm excited when I get the chance to share them with others. I've been in the process of planning them for most of my life. They have been influenced by the many books I've read, shows and movies I've seen.

I even decided to try and create an original world for the DnD game I made up for my brother and friend, and have thus far, made another massive world, with numerous sub-plots happening at once. And I plan to write that into a book eventually, when I get the chance to, using the characters those two decided to make as the central characters. Chronicles of Ovaleen is still a Guardian Universe Story, thus it still has the same Pantheon of Gods, and many of the same characters from the others, though as it is a different world, they are also different, not carbon copies of their other identities.

I am a good writer when I set my mind and time completely to it, but as of late the stories I have showcased on this blog, have been hastily put together things, that I wrote in ten minutes. So they are not my best work, possibly verging on my worst and over commarised.

Anyway point I'm trying to make is, I didn't put up this blog to bitch about my life and talk about personal troubles, I put it up to talk about things that interest me, at the moment that's my story. The Real world is in many ways crap and boring to me.
I was actually going to use this blog to write about my characters, but its hard to show how truly complicated most of them are in a blog, I just find it hard to write properly on a computer. Its much more easy to write naturally with a pen and paper.

None of my characters can kill fifty people without raising a finger, or barely raising a finger, except for the ones who happen to be virtually demigods, and they are few and far between, unless you count ordering people to do it for you the same thing.

Now Eledor is more a reflection of me when I'm in a serious mood, hie height is the same as mine, his weight would be the same as mine if I bulked up a little. And he's all about tragedy, almost all of his loved ones died in his arms, he's introverted and aloof due to that fact, and can very easily loose his temper and go berserk when those remaining of those he cares about are put in danger. He finds it hard to fit, when I first started writing Eledor as a character in my stories, a lot of his thoughts and actions reflected what I would've done. Feeling like an outsider and all that. The Saudes Saga particularly focuses on hi as a character.
Though the Realm would give him his most human portrayal as he possesses no special power, his strength and speed are not so superior to the other characters, and he has had less time to experience the world.
Eledor is essentially, personality wise a darker me, not the me I show to everyone but the me I don't show, the angrier and more bitter me, he is also in a way a tragic hero.
My other character Finn, represents a bit more of my traditional role, I take in Roleplaying games, the stand up guy, who fights the good fight, despite the many foes in his path, though again he has a bit of bitterness, and my grumpiness in him when I get a bit stressed.
Aeries is extremely important to the progression of the story, while Eledor remains largely static and slowly changes, Aeries is the character who grows more and more confident, grows up in her attitude to life, and generally develops, into one of the strongest characters of the story.

Now the last post was simply a fifteen minute rant by me, and I got over it, just remember I had people making fun of my story or saying it was crap all through Year ten, so I "REALLY" don't like people saying its boring, it reminds me of that time and I arc up.

Anyway, I'm sleep deprived and slightly grumpy still at the moment.
Let it be known that I will never touch on anything said in the "Screw this" post every again, I don't like looking at those parts of my life that I hate and won't go back there.

Anyway, I don't have to get up till nine or ten tomorrow!
Yay for me!

Screw this!

I don't talk about personal things for several reasons, I could easily alienate everyone I know, if I did.
Deep down I am an incredibly angry person, unsure of his own future whether or not he should be in the course he is in. I had to deal with almost continually being picked on, from grade 3 to year 11(stopped at year 11).
And at one point was nearly molested by another year 7 kid, in defence I stabbed him in the hand with a pen I was holding.
You wanna get into the whole thing, I'm find it difficult being in large gatherings, especially when I'm dragged of to parties, where I barely know anyone. I don't feel like I belong, so I withdraw into my shell so to speak...
My borther before leaving for Melbourne for his operation, told me I was to blame for ruining his life, that I stole most of his friends. Do you know how that felt when you think he might not have been coming back?
The only reason I met his friends is because he dragged me along to a lot of things.
I've been broke for the past three weeks, only five dollars literally to my name!
I don't talk about my personal opinions becasue a lot of people annoy me, and I don't want to hurt them, and they don't often sit to well with others. I'm also perpetually tired because I go to bed at around one in the morning, and get up at seven in the morining, six hours of sleep, instead of nine hours.
I don't have a great job, but because of Uni I can't even work there at all!
I had to deal with the shock that once you reach VCE, the teachers don't care for you being you, they just want you to fit into a program they have decided is the best for you, and then returning to the old way upon reacxhing University.
As many of my friends who knew me from Golden Square say, VCE destroyed me...academically.
I can't talk to girls, I'm to scared to, so my chances of getting a girlfriend are limited, I keep thinking I'll end up like my Great Uncle, a seventy year old bachelor, who doesn't think he's old.
I offer good advice, but rarely follow it myself, making me a hypocrite, and I hate hypocrites.
I want to be a writer but my writing is subpar.
Enough personal crap, now I've had my fucking bitch...

Hello anyone out there?!

Is it just me, or does no one like me anymore? Wait, that is something to do with me...
So where is everyone?
What's everyone been up to, and all that mumbo jumbo...

I'm so lonely...

To ease this lonliness I need people to post comments, I don't feel like anyone reads my entries without comments. I mean come on it takes maybe five minutes to read what I put down, and then all you have to do is write a five or more word comment on what you read.

By the by, Elder Scrolls IV Oblivion is an awesome game.

And it runs on high settings on my new computer!

My friend who told me about the game only got it working on low settings, and it was still a drain on his computer...mine sprints through everything, without any trouble...though it isn't able to do Ultra high...that's reserved for supercomputers.

I have purchased a new computer if no one could guess. Its big, black and silver and has carry handles and stands on it. It also has five fans running in it.

For anyone who cares, here's the specs...

3.2GHZ Pentium 4, 256mb ATI X800 series(special edition), 2GB DDR2 ram, 17' LCD monitor, with built in speakers. Subwoofer enhanced desktop speakers. DVD-RW drive.

When this computer was made 2 years ago, it was worth nearly $5000, I got it for $2000.
Though my only gripe with it is the speakers, which frequently shake loose from the attachment in the back of the computer. So I hve only one speaker working, which can be very annoying, when your playing a game, or listening to music.

I'm a pepsi Max addict, or rather a caffeine addict, I now get headaches if I don't have some form of caffeine a day...surprising, hell no considering the amount of pepsi max I drink all the time.

Anyways that's enough from me

Sayonara

Chronicles of Ovaleen

A long time ago there was a planet named Ovaleen.
Several Gods ruled over it peacefully, Death, Kidari, Culmaryn, Solaryss, Templar, Scorebee, Nazrul, Beelzebub, Shandros, Kilnari and the ancient dragon lords.
Several races came to be on the planet, Eldrasans, the Kilnari, humans and the Aethyran.
Ovaleen itself was divided into four continents, Santaurez, Rudiev, Angelus and Teldai.
Santaurez was a large continent with rich resources and was home to humans, Eldrasans, Aethyran and Kilnari.
Angelus, was the smallest continent, and was in fact a series of four large islands, in a loose ring, they were settled by humans seeking a new life.
Rudiev, was the largest continent vast and uncharted, it became home to every race bar Eldrasans.
Teldai, was a medium sized continent, dominated by thick forests and tall mountains, the ancestral home of the Eldrasans, and the center of the Eldrasan Empire.
Eldrasans were the longest lived and most ancient of the races, and they called Culmayrn their chief diety, in many ways they held a center area to the humans and Aethyran, they had the looks of humans, with the strength and agility of the Aethyran.
Humans were numerous and powerful magically and intellectually and paid homage to Solaryss and Templar as their chief gods. However the gods not happy with just those races decided to "modify" small pockets of humanity, creating stocky short humans, who became known as Dwarves, and short thin intellectually gifted people, who became known as Gnomes.
The Aethyran themselves represented a diverse range of humanoids, ranging from savage beasts, to intelligent and cultured civilisations, and possessed the largest population. The Kilnari were brutal yet intelligent, and sought to wipe the other races out, however they were numerically inferior, thus their efforts were easily stunted.
Kidari became the patron deity of a small group of individuals devoted to nature, and gave them the knowledge of how to use nature's power to assist nature. They became known as the Druidic Council, and quickly grew in size.

About five hundred years ago, a war in heaven occurred, as Nazrul, Shandros and Beelzebub came into conflict with Solaryss, Culmaryn and Templar.
Nazrul the most powerful of the three created what would become known as hell, a place of madness and evil, and created creatures to populate it, known as Nolsaryn or by mortals as demons.
Shandros once well liked as a patron for free living, became the patron for assassins, and thieves guilds.
Beelzebub, created his own people to populate Hell, known as the Desoltros, and corrupted many of the Sireal (angelic beings servants of the gods) to serve him.
At the same time Scorebee descended into madness, as Death transformed further and further into a malevolent being.

The church of Solaryss, a human organisation, was quickly gifted with some of Solaryss's own power, allowing them to defend the mortal realm, or Ovaleen, from the new threat.
The church of Templar came into being at about this time, as Templar, though his servants, created a vast militaristic order of knights and scholars to help the Church of Solaryss.

Four hundred years passed with brief but bloody battles being fought to help protect Ovaleen from the demons, until finally the war came to a head. Nazrul, took on Solaryss, Templar, Culmayn and Kidari in a massive battle over Ovaleen, the end result of the battle was Solaryss's death and Nazrul being sealed in a pocket dimension.
Solaryss's death resulted in an unforeseen reaction within the Church of Solaryss, over half the order went mad, and joined their rival order the Demon Guard, and the rest dwindled in power. The Church once the most powerful human order, was destroyed overnight. Templar worship grew as it became clear that Solaryss's paladins could no longer protect them, from evil.

However Nazrul's imprisonment was only temporary...
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That is a kinda introduction to Chronicles of Ovaleen, showing a bit of the past major events, I've left a lot out but that's because I didn't think of it. Tell me what ya think if you dare.

And also as I was a fan of Steve Irwin's show despite not watching all that much of it, I would like to say, that even though its been said by many many newspapers at least forty times, he will be missed. And my sympathy goes out to his family for their loss.

Not much but my fingers hurt now...

Goodbye and Goodnight, and Good morning

A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...

I remeber a time when I was very little and those words, appeared on the television screen, I could not get enough of Star Wars...
Know what, it hasn't changed I still love Star Wars, even the three prequels, even the scene with Vader screaming out noooooooooo! I watch it now, I'm not making connections to other films, James earl Jones, is the best voice actor for that role. After I got over the hilarity of that scene when I first watched it I don't find it funny. But then I know much more then the average movie goer about the backstory, and the motivations of the characters, in this universe that I so love.
The original inspiration of my writing, all comes back to Star Wars, the epicness, the characters, sure they changed every year, since then.
But I remember a time where I was making up stories in my head about the Empire being evil, and replacing the Rebels with a small fleet of ships run by, get this...SNAKES!
And then we hit the dinosaur phase, and suddenly dinosaur planet came into being, a massive planet half the size of the galaxy. And the only thing that lived on it were dinosaurs. Oh yeah then I started incorporating the power rangers into my story, however instead of being noisy martial artists they were shape changing almost god like beings. And they were the protectors of the world, this was when I was in grade one and two just so you know.

If only I had that creativity now days...but hey, I could barely write so I must say I have improved in other ways.
Star Wars got me interested in the whole writing, making up stories thing, and recently I have rediscovered it so to speak, good ole'Wookiepedia...even though its not that old.

Anyway, I think I'm going to start writing again soon, I guess I'm kinda in the recharge phase I usually get to at this point of the year, start playing games and reading books with good stories, recharge the batteries for a storm of creative, reworking of my story, or I should say stories.

Anyway, seeya on Wednesday.[

A short post

It's been ages since I last wrote one of these...bahahahaha

Anyway, I was actually surprised that it was still up.

Anyway that's about it, very short aye?

Stupid Writer's block!

Things are starting to look up

I swears, I'm starting to like Uni again, maybe its the A I just gots in Learning Tech, or something but these are the most A's for major assignments I have seen in more than two years.

And things are starting to look up for the family again, operation success, and my brother seems fine, all good news for me. Now all I need to do is start and finish my electronic Portfolio...Using Dreamweaver of course.
Its meant to be like a webpage sought of affair, something I'm quite good at doing.

A short story


He kept to the shadows as he followed, what was it about this girl which seemed so familiar?
He shook his head, as he was about to leave, a voice in the dark ahead of him coursed him to stop, what was going on here? He moved closer treading soundlessly on the gravel beneath him.
His hand moved to the hilt of one of his swords, as the girl seemed to be backing away from whoever had been speaking. He moved closer still and heard the voice, his hand tightened on his sword.
She almost broke to running, but her military training kicked in forcing her to stand and listen, he could tell she was terrified. The owner of the voice suddenly lunged out for her with a sword, he moved without thought, his right sword left its sheath, and sliced through the man’s hand, neatly severing it, as the man screamed. She screamed in turn, as he neatly positioned himself between her and her assailants. Another two lunged at him as their companion collapsed to the ground bleeding heavily. He drew his other companion sword and held both at bay.
His eyes were hard as he pushed them back, whoever this girl was he wanted to protect her. He kicked one in the stomach with enough force to send him flying across the street. The other man let out a cry of fear as he ran away, dropping his weapons as he ran.
He turned to look at the girl, as she still stared at the dieing man; he looked her in the face till his fierce stare caught her attention. He softened his expression, “You should go.” He murmured.
“Who are you?” she asked quietly, almost mute from the shock.
He didn’t answer for a time as he thought over what to say, “I’m a wanderer.” He finally answered, he started walking away, he had been here too long already, she still hadn’t moved however. He turned to look at her, something was wrong with her.
His eyes widened as she collapsed, he caught her in his arms, and lifted her into the air with surprising ease. He looked at her silently before he began walking, retracing his steps.
He eventually reached the barracks, as the moon reached its zenith. A surprised shout was heard, and a massive man, ran up to him.
“Aeries!” he said in alarm, looking at her limp form, his gaze transferred to the man holding her, “What happened to her, and who are you?” he asked carefully, not sure what to make of the black cloaked, white haired man.
“She ran into a bad crowd, I intervened.” He said quietly, gently placing her in the arms of the man. He turned and began to walk away.
“Who the hell are you?!” the huge man asked again.
The wanderer looked at him for several moments, “A passer buyer, no more no less.” He said quietly before he disappeared into the shadows of the city.

Another part of the opening segment of the Saudes Saga...tell me what ya think, if you feel like it of course.

Man I've got a long day ahead of me, four and a half hours till my next class and I'm stuck in all day...

Well sayonara, and goodluck with everyone's exams, and rearrangements of their lives...

A place called falling to pieces

I have had as much sleep as a...uh...as much as a ...uh shark doesn't work, they actually do sleep, uh...hmmm, do jellyfish get tired?
Anyway I've had as much sleep as a jellyfish this week...yeah...*loud over done cough*

Anyway enough bout me, more about the Guardian Universe...

Now split into three different worlds.

The Saudes Saga, made up of two series.
Chronicles of Ovaleen, (yes based on the DnD game I dare I say Dungeon Mastered)
The Realm(I came up with this one revisiting prior work and after playing Medieval Total War for days on end.)

Each world are set in different universes, so characters from one cannot interact with another, unless I decide to start doing comedic crossovers.
Characters they all contain are the Immortals

Eledor
Draicon
Finn
Saldesin
Sorbrean
Calden
Gothilius Sarah
Araluen Gareth
Aeries Vincent
Elessa Nazrul
Adela
Lynaldris
Nira
Tiranna
Toyohashi
Alec
Emily

NEED MORE CHARACTERS MUCH MORE!
...anyway, heres a brief little description of each world.

Saudes Saga
The saudes Saga is split into two parts.
Part one, focuses on the introduction of key characters and alliances that persevere throughout the entire continuim of the Saudes Saga.
The year is 1185AW, a massive invasion force decimated the northern kingdom of Risonia, the scattered few survivors claimed the army possessed magical beasts, that could tear the walls down of the mighty Risonian fortress, and were supported by thousands of of humanlike creatures, who appeared human except for their eerie green lizard like eyes and scattered scales across their faces. In this time a young female soldier of the Felkonian Militia, Aeries is swept up into a desperate race to save the human race from genocide.
Part two jumps nearly three thousand years into the future.
The year is 2085AE
A massive war has overtaken the galaxy as the Alliance engages in a desperate war to fight off the massive might of the Orphan League. Cail a young Alliance Lieutenant finds himself at the command of a damaged prototype battlecruiser deep behind enemy lines, due to sabotage. Charcters introduced in part one reappear, though many are greatly changed by the events that led up to this point.

Chronicles of Ovaleen
Based on the Dnd game I created for Tendafoot, my sister and my brother, the Chronicles of Ovaleen(not Ovalteen dammit!) is also split into two parts. The first part concerns the adventures of Rain a young druid, Aramil an Eldrasan warrior and his sister Mint a multitalented girl, as they find themselves threatened with death in a years time if they do not do what a mighty demon king tells them to do. Their adventures take them all over the world of Ovaleen, meeting numerous characters who help, hinder and completely ignore the group as they travel.
Part two, the Angelus Campaign, set on the small continent of Angelus, some fifty years later, a young knight, her adopted father, and her silent guardian set out on a quest to end the Demonic hold on Angelus and Ovaleen. They are joined by the powerful eldrasan sorceress Clairess, a young and energenic half-eld, who happens to be a daughter of Wren, one of the main helping characters from Part 1, and the dark ranger Lucas Windshear who hides a terrible heritage.

The Realm
In the distant land of Fareis, exists a mighty Empire simply known as the Realm. This more than any of the other worlds, is based on historic peoples, with a touch of fantasy of course. ShandrillanKnights, christened by the Church of Shandrila act as the officers, police and special forces of the Realm. It focuses on the story of a young squire by the name of(you guessed it) Aeries, who through the help of her adoptive father Sir Findley Falcon, has been training to become a squire. On the day of selection by knights for squires however she is overlooked, for being a girl, as she was better than many of the other potential squires. Fortunately, in a way, a strange black cloaked man challenges her to a duel. In the ensuing fight he toys with her, before defeating her with just two strokes of his sword. Revealing himself to be a knight as well, he takes her on as his squire, to as he says, train her properly in the way of combat. It follows her adventurous across the massive Realm, she slowly begins to learn more about her retiscent Master as the journey.
Meanwhile a man naming himself the Hand of Death is assassinating many powerful people throughout the Realm, in the name of the Shandrillan Church.

Now they are only brief intros to each story.
Hope Y'al like them.

On another note, I want burning crusade to come out already, and Advent Children rocks in all languages!
And on another, another note I got meself a second blue tongue, though this one is viscious, I call him Rex. He attacked a pen my brother put in front of him.
my other Blue Tongue lizard is named hmmm...actually I don't have a name for her...how about Hissy?

Family estrangement

It's annoying being told by your sister that you are unhealthy, I admit I'm out of shape, when it comes to running, however its even worse to being told that I will die by her.
She entered into this strange state after only doing one term's worth of Health and developement, I shudder to think what the nest year and a half will bring. It's good to eat healthy I admit that, I like eating vegetables, I'll eat fruit occasionally, but we hardly ever have traditional fruits such as apples and grapes around our house, we have wrinkled looking exotic fruits, that I think look as dry as a bone.
I love a type of chicken curry, that incorporates, chicken, with pees, carrot and spiral noodles, which represents a good three of the food groups. Unfortunately, my sister's protests to the evils of this wonderful food, often extremely vocal and hateful have caused this dish, one of a few I know how to cook. to go on a six month hiatus. The main reason is my sister hates pees, I remeber she used to love them, until one day she nearly choked on one, she claims other reasons, but before that time she couldn't have enough of pees, and she simply grew an aversion to the pee, to the point of throwing her pees at people.
Now I also find it annoying how self rightious some people are, after only doing one term of health she hates all forms of fats, despises our current diet, which admitadly has been on the whole rather crap, I've asked Mum a few times for vegetables, but in the end, end up with bits and pieces, which means pies, or some sought of chinese food and chips or wedges.
But she still told me I was going to die, and she has been acting almost crazy half the time, as if she constantly is ingesting sugar of some form.

I have unhealthy habits
-I drink Pepsi Max at "least" once a day
-I visit McDonalds twice a week
-I buy Pringles regularily
-I eat honeycomb chocolate a lot

but I make up for this in other ways...sorta
-I have a complete aversion, to what I call rubber and plastic lollies, food made almost entirely from sugar, the smell even makes me feel nausious. this includes "gummy lollies" lollipops, even mints to a point.
-I drink tea, without sugar, and with some milk
-I voraciously clean vegetables off the plate when they are placed in front of me.
-And I don't eat much red meat, the benefit is that white meat supposedly is better for you

Anyway I've had enough of healthly diet crap, all I really want is a decent meal instead of BBQ's, takeaway, and bits and pieces, full course meal soughta thing.

And now onto more important issues, Dirge of Cerberus has a great soundtrack...I'm listening to it right now, and I am extremly impressed at it quaility and different sounds.

Ghost in the Shell is a great anime series, I prefer the series to the movie, longer and far more in depth then the movie, and the action scenes are superb, make me go wow...not in the sense of running off to play World of Warcraft of course...

I get a full week of teaching rounds next week, and I'm with my favourite teacher of all time, the one who took me for 5/6, one of the two dragons of my primary school.
She is extremly funny too, you'd be surprised how much she sounds scary, but when you come back as an adult you realise that she most defenitely not a bad lady, with a kind of black sense of humour.

Anyway

Next time in Eledors World, will real life again intrude on the blog entries, or will Eledor write more about the Guardian Universe, find out next week on Eledor's World.

Sayonara folks.

I'm back from out of space, walked in here to find you sitting on my couch

I love Men in Black, anyway
First time in ages

The Guardian Universe has only gotten stronger and more powerful in the past couple of months, I love using such words makes it feel so much better.
Unfortunately I haven't actually managed to write anything substantial that actual resembles story writing.
Now about another thing I've been meaning to write about for ages or not either one. World of Warcraft is cool, but ever so annoying and time consuming. But enough about my personal gripes with a game I play al the time, Druids are so far my favourite class, you get bored of spellcasting and healing, you can become a bear, and rip into enemies, or a seal to swim through water, or a Cheetah to run as fast as a mount, or a Big cat to act as a sneaky Rouge
Hmm, yes I'm not obsessed.
Anyway I just recently finished watching an awesome anime, called Full Metal Alchemist, it has so many twists and turns, the ending leaves you scratching your head in confusion. The characters are cool and its not a small cast, and there's not all that much time wasted on talking moments.
It does talk though at points, but not in a bad boring manner and is intelligently written and the dubbing is great, so many tough characters make up the cast and Major Armstrong is the coolest character I have ever seen.
I wish I was more like him. He has the bet talking roles in the entire show. Now I want to see the concluding movie.
Another great show is Gundam Seed, not your traditional mecha show, its ending is one of the best I have ever seen, ever. It left going wow, and AWESOME...anyway that's just me, what I recommend though is to watch both and make up your own opinions about them.

Anyway, I want comments to start flowing in again, so I can start conversing all over again and waste my unprecious huge amounts of free time at Uni.

And if no one has noticed my hair has been cut...yeah as if no one wouldn't...

Anyway, I'm doing the Education course at Latrobe, and have only twelve hours of class.
Well actually its about thirteen but with practicum it don't count.
However I have to spend each of my three days of Uni, from 9-to-6:30 because
A, I don't have lisence to call my own,
B, It wouldn't matter anyway as Mum needs the only car I'm allowed to drive,
C, Mum and Dad refuse to give me four lifts back and fourth from uni on wednesday, my crappest day.
One hour of Tute in the morning, 9:00-10:00, and then A lecture at 3:00
I finish most days at four or five
And also miss out on work thanks to this...
A real bummer when my earnings are so damn low as well.

Ah well anyway, I better be going to bed...

Sayonara all

A long time ago Far in the distant Future

I love contradictions and Oxymorons, anyway, I've been incredible lazy for the past couple of weeks, and its all coming together this weekend, I have to get a lot of things done
And now I want to go and buy food as I finally, FINALLY have money again. It's been nearly six months since I last got money, and man o man do I need, I had virtually as in really no money left in either account.
My story has taken another turn, once again, I've changed a few characters names I wasn't happy with and built up the background on a few more.Chrnociles of Ovaleen, is almost getting to the stage where I can start writing trial stories for it, though I have to start looking at the bigger picture in it.
Anyway I don't really feel like writing much more right at the moment, so sayonara

Halfway through

I'm halfway through my exams as of now and have another one in little over half an hour.
I hate maths! I went okay on the first exam but the second, the questions almost made my brain explode with the effort needed to just understand what was being asked for me to do.
English Language is next, and then I go home and tomorrow I have ITPM and on Friday Chemistry, and my favuorite Aunty is coming to visit on Friday and its my last day of BSSC ever!
Oh yeah, I've been waiting for this break for ages and ages, not that I'm there yet of course but will be soon. We need more rain over the reservoirs Australia's so dry at the moment...I just had an interesting idea, if people are worried about the Sea level rising, why don't we flood Australia's desert? Its below sea level as it is and it would significantly lower the sea level, yeah what a great idea now all we have to do is move the thousands of people who call that area home without asking them, much like how China decided to flood sveral major cities to make the three gorges bloody dam. Damn China, I wonder how many animals they killed making it and people as well.
The Guardian Universe is now entirely science fiction until I decide to write prequels, which will only happen once I've finished the main series of however many books it takes to write it...yes well that's about it I better be going now or I'll miss my exam which would be a first for me.

Sayonara

My last day of kids school

I think its about time I blogged again, now what to talk about...
Oh I know!
Homeworld is a great game.
Period.
I just started playing it again, reading up on the backstory again, and a whole manner of different things, and I REALLY WANT TO GET A BETTER COMPUTER SO THAT I CAN PLAY HOMEWORLD 2.
(Deep breath)
My brother just got Jovian Chronicles and it looks cool, well to me at least, I'm into mecha after all. I've only got a quarter of the Gundam Seed dvds, a second series just came out in Japan, and I have five of the first series of Dvds twentyfive episodes in all. And I've paid $150 for them, just another $150 till I finish the first series off, and work just started again so I can finally replce all the money I spent at McDonalds and KFC. (Finally)
The Chronicles of Ovaleen is now a stand alone universe, that most definitley will have several books written about it if I can help it.
The main characters are Rain a young druid, Aramil and Mint sibling Elves, and follows their adventures across the world of Ovaleen. Though some significant changes are needed to be done to it in order for it be fully original.
And its not Ovalteen, that just sounds wierd and is more difficult to say then Ovaleen.
Ovaleen is made up of four continents, Ordezua the second smallest is home to a variety of different races, and is a largely temperate place. Angelus is the second largest, and is in fact a series of four massive islands, named, North, South, East and West Angelus. Tarval is the native home of the Elves and is the smallest continent, and is prinicpally covered in a lush and vibrant forest. Uyllisius is the largest continent, at lest ten times the size of Ordezua, and is also the most varied geographically, ranging from Temperate, to harsh deserts, to humid Rainforest to magnificent mountain ranges.
In between the continents are many islands of varying size, and people.
The Chronicles of Ovaleen is a traditional fantasy, with no real elements of Science Fiction coming into play, it does intersect with the Guardian Universe at one key point though. Anyway I'm proud of the way its evolved from what it started out as.
And now more then ever I want to play Homeworld!
Though I'm stuck at school till one o'clock.
I just had a sad thought, I will never catch the bus home again, not that I care mind you!
Or do I? You never can really tell...
I guess I better stop now, before I make it too long.

Well Sayanora, or however you spell that word(shutup Simon!)
Seeya next time...Mwahahaahaha

I'm a freak, I'm a freak, I'm a freak!

Now that I've got your attention its time for something completely different.
Hmmm, thats right exams are a mere month away for me...
Not good or is it? Finally school would be over, I would be free, in a manner of speaking, I could do things I've been wanting to do all year that I haven't had the time for, such as story writing and...drawing...and other things that don't spring to mind.
My siblings are as crazy as each other!
These holidays have been great, I've been needing a serious break time from virtually everything I've been putting myself through for the past semester, late nights early mornings, and many other things.
And I've started relooking at the CHronicles of Ovaleen, and now I have two comfirmed worlds for me to write in, they overlap at one single point, with just one character.
The Guardian Universe is also a hell of a lot bigger and I've finally found where I will end it and start it. Now to work on the inbetweent stuff in greater detail, and figure out in greater detail the many different personalities of my cast of charcters and their backgrounds, its a big job, which only I can do(well that's my opinion anyway)

Well that's about it, I think I might write a post once a month, from now on or maybe not, who knows, you certainly don't.
And as my good friend Brendan always says

Cheers

The Long dark tea time of the soul

That's what everyone needs a V8 chainsaw. Cuts through a metre thick log in just three seconds, needs several people to drop it through the log though.
Yes you heard right V8 chainsaw, the new age in rapid logging.

Anyway, the Guardian Universe is now part three of a much greater story. A quartet of a story.
And in itself it has three different parts.
Maybe I'm making it too big, aww who cares I like it this way, it gives much greater depth to the Guardian Universe, and characters like Seer Maelstrom get explained in much greater detail and what makes Eledor special is also fully explained.
Yeah well if you haven't been able to tell I've been in creative overdrive for the past several weeks.

And I just recently joined a forum site, TuxRepublic, anyway enough about me more about me. I really need money, really, really lots amount.
Not that I'm in debt or anything, but let's just say I'm a very long way from being able to afford a new computer, like maybe $1000 dollars off or something.
Oh yeah my cousin proposed to his girlfriend and they're getting married soon, I went up to Ouyen for a bonfire party, it was fun, and they had pistachio nuts, and chilly chicken tenderloins, the absolute best in quality chicken food.
Aw Yeah

Well that's enough from me...oh and Ryan don't turn into a bindge drinker.

Anime stuff

Anime's are great I haven't seen one I can really complain about, except, Pokemon, Dragonball Z and lately One Piece.
I don't really understand a lot of people's perceptions that anime are a load of crap(especially some of my closer friends), as I find them often more intelligently written then comparable shows made in the US or other countries.
I am a big fan of the Gundam series and have read a lot up on it, despite only seeing Gundam Wing in its entirety, and just half of Gundam Seed. The annoying thing is that the other series have as yet to be released in Australia(if ever) as far as I am aware of, at any rate, another annoying thing is the high price per DVD for anime, it eats a hole that just won't go away in the pocket, though food is pretty good at doing that to(From experience)
I'm currently watching a show called InuYasha (Inuyasha or however else it is meant to be written) and find it to be one of the best shows I have ever watched, only problem is its late timeslot during week days 11 pm, and for someone who has to get up at 7 that can become a growing problem.
Anyway, I've watched a fair number of different animes thanks to an anime club I joined ages ago, though I don't know if it is still going. Maybe renting them would be a good idea?
Yeah well I really hate English Literature, not only does it swamp me with uneeded DLA's compared to my other classes, five DLAs per topic compared to the one per topic for English Language, it is also one of my worst classes, and I have to do a talk with some guy I haven't yet had a chance to talk to about he talk, and I have to do it tomorrow, first thing, my teacher only sending me back an email that I had to do it today.
Man this really bites...
Seriously...
And my sister is an airhead made of air type lead and monkey juice, yeah...I think.
Anyway I've been making progress again with the Guardian Universe, and have finally decided, once and for all(or until I get a better idea) where to start and to end it. I'm so proud(In a highly emotional way) and I have expanded upon and built up the back story for many charcters, and due to a serious lack of antagonists have changed some of my main characters into evil revenge obsessed evil people. Yeah they got bad, and have finally figured out why Eledor and Aerie are so special compared to the other characters.
Yeah well life's good, and pain proves that people are alive, (man my leg joint hurts) and I am not so prouud to be human.
To true...stupid sucky world, man I want my Guardian Universe series to be one of the crowning achievements of my life. Yeah man so that's the way it is and man I haven't posted in a long time largely due top running out of internet credits at school. Damn wikipedia with its huge amounts of trivia and useless information, wasting my money and ruining small parts of the story for Gundam Seed.
Hmmm....nup brain go poop, ideas are dying, death like gloom overcoming brain, nah just kidding, well maybe a little anyway.
And that's all fokes

I wonder what that show Tendafoot wanted me to watch was?

And that's the end of this chapter.

Guardian Universe Future Era ©

Set nearly four thousand years after the past era events and two thousand five hundred years after the modern era, a massive space war is being fought among two powerful Empires, the Toreno Republic, and the Harness Cluster Empire, the war has lasted on and off for over a hundred years, and has cost the lives of nearly several trillion people.
Unlike the past era and the modern era racism between Aethyr and humans has died out completely due to their coexistance for nearly four thousand years.
Many characters who were in the the other two era's make reappearances in this one, though the passage of years has changed more then a few of them and some remain the same.
The Future Era focuses at first around the crew of a new prototype ship that's first flight goes disastrously wrong and ends up deep behind enemy lines.
Its scale quickly escalates as the main characters make their reappearances, and new characters are introduced in this one, also much is learned about a character from the past era, named Sigurd.
This part of the story features heavy mecha elements, the mecha are called MCA's (Mobile Combat Armour) though if someone could think up a better name, by all means type it in for me to judge and a lot of getting into genetics and that stuff, and it is filled with massive battles where many friends are killed. Not my friends, that would be bad, I don't have enough to even think of killing one, friends of the characters.

I must admit that a lot of what I write is inspired by games and shows I watched, Eledor in his first incarnation was inspired strangely enough by a mixture of star wars and dinosaurs...don't ask. And after playing the Final Fantasy's, VIII and VII he pretty much got to where he is today, and then I watched Gundam Wing, and I found that Mecha was bloody awesome, and from that came the decision to make different time Eras.
Past, Modern, Future, and one final one, oddly enough named Finale.
And at the centre of everything is literally the planet named Saudes.

I recommend Gundam Seed to anyone with any interest in anime, it's Gundam Wing, on steroids and with genetic engineering, and even has zoids!

Well Sayonara and the like

Whales won't die out just yet

I was getting extremely worked up about this whaling issue over the past couple of days more then anyone could really know, it affected me so bad I took it out on my little sister, well she'll get me back eventually, or maybe I was just evening the score, she punches a lot and they often hurt.
Now enough about that, thank god that Australia and New Zealand still managed to get the majority vote, by three despite Japan's bribing of other governments.
I would like to say, that I still don't like Japan's whaling activities but you can't judge an entire country by the actions of a few of its people, and beside most whale contains high levels of mercury and other nasty products, those who eat the meat will kill themselves eventually, so people will no longer eat whale meat eventually.
Well one can hope, another issue that has really annoyed me, is the treatment of the RSPCA leader, by animal activists. Most of them aren't Australian, well the leader of them definitely ain't, but to push someone to have to have bodyguards whenever he goes to public functions is wrong, and animal activists should stop with their more extremists activities, do they want to be labled as terrorists, because their activities in this area borders extremely close to terrorism, it doens't help their cause one iota by doing it, other then putting the law against them.

Hey I'm pretty good about talking about world issues, maybe I should do it more often, or maybe I'm just horribly bad at it and don't realise it, anyway that's all from me today at least.

Sayonara

Should Whaling continue?

If you ask me straight out I will say no.
Whales are largely an endangered species that should be completely banned from being hunted. Numbers barely exceed one hundred thousand in any one species, they breed slowly and large scale modern harvast of whales would make them all extinct.
Also whales are possibly sentient creatures like humans, I read a story once where a group of two whales were swimming along, when a boat carelessy hit the female whale killing her instantly. In retaliation the male whale sank the boat. Serves them right but anyway, the male whale obvious showed that whales do seek revenge, an often thought do be human emotion.
Anyway Japan are being bastards and are in open defiance of the IWC's ruling on the matters.
They even fucking whale in Antarctica. I don't know what any one else thinks but to me that shouldn't be bloody happening.
America should do something about Japan's action in this manner, Japan are a highly advanced nation with many thriving industries. Why do they need to whale? It's not something you will find to be extremely culturely important to them, even if they have been whaling for a long time.
Anyway I like a lot of what Japan makes, anime for example but this just goes a bit far for my tastes.
Another thing most whale meat is unacceptable for human consumption due to a large amount of pesticides and mercury in their bodies.
One of Japan's arguments for why they should be allowed to whale was that Australia kills and eats kangaroos.
One problem with that argument, Kangaroo's number in the many millions, and are often considered pests around cities. And the large scale production of kangaroo meat is non existant in most states of Australia, except for possibly the Northern Territory, where food is scarce any way. Now This is an obvious flaw with their argument, also what Japan chooses to hunt are classed as endangered species and are supposed to be protected from hunting.
Another of Japan's arguments was that whales have eaten all their fish, utter bullshit, most whale don't even eat fish and Sperm Whales eat fish far below the line that most fishing ships fish. The main reason for the drop in fish is their own bloody actions, over fishing in their waters tends to kill of fish populations.
Anyway that's been my beaf for several days since I first heard about this utterly stupid debate. If I had a destroyer of some type, I would hunt down and destroy whaling ships...probably the reason why I don't have one...other then the fact that I'm also seventeen years old, anyway, you probably get my general message.
If you want to comment do so, but only about whaling for this blog at least.